Paragraph Writing

My exciting moment in my life                 I was shy and did not assertive.   My teacher gave me to speak in front of the class. I felt very excited. I was fear to speak in public. When I spoke in front of the class, I took a deep breath. As I stood in the middle of the room, I looked down at my audience. Then, I looked down at my note cards. I did not make eye contact with teacher and friends. While I spoke, my heart was beating so fast. But finally I would say until the end. It was a very exciting thing for me. 

Exercise 1 page 3 Out line >>Who was/were involved in the story? - Myself and family. >>What happened? - I went to Ratchaburi with my family. >>When did the story happen? - The story happened last year. >>Where did the story happen? - At Suanphueng in Ratchaburi. >>How did the story happen? - We stayed at Suanphueng resort for two days. - We relaxed on the swimming pool and visited around the resort. - We went to Water Park. - We swam and took a lot of photos. - We had lunch at restaurant. >>How did the story end? - My mother saw her friends so she invited friends to eat with us.       My happiness trip               I went to Ratchaburi with my family last year. I had a wonderful weekend in Ratchaburi. We stayed at Suanphueng resort for two days. The resort was great that beautiful and clean. We relaxed on the swimming pool and visite...