Describing a person
The handsome father and his cute daughter
This is the
picture of a handsome father and his cute daughter. They are father and daughter
who are very close.
The father’s
name is Kane. He has short straight blond hair, blue eyes, pointed nose, and
fair complexion. He is a tall man of 30 years. He always wears a T-shirt and blue
jeans. He is a good-
looking and handsome. In addition, he is a gentle friendly and helpful. He is a
very kind of businessman. This is why Kane is popular among his friends.
The
daughter’s name is Kate.She has long blond hair, blue eyes, pointed nose, and fair complexion.She is a
tall girl of 12 years. She always wears a long white skirt. She is a pretty.She
smiles a lot so her face always looks happy. She studies at Joshep School. All
her friends like her because she is helpful. She never refuses to give help to
them when they need it.
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