Describing a person
The handsome father and his cute daughter This is the picture of a handsome father and his cute daughter. They are father and daughter who are very close. The father’s name is Kane. He has short straight blond hair, blue eyes, pointed nose, and fair complexion. He is a tall man of 30 years. He always wears a T-shirt and blue jeans. He is a good- looking and handsome. In addition, he is a gentle friendly and helpful. He is a very kind of businessman. This is why Kane is popular among his friends. The daughter’s name is Kate.She has long blond hair, blue eyes, pointed nose, and fair complexion.She is a tall girl of 12 years. She always wears a long white skirt. She is a pretty.She smiles a lot so her face always looks happy. She studies at Joshep School. All her friends like her because she is helpful. She never refuses to give ...

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