My Classmate
My Classmate
Zai is a good friend of mine. She is
a tall and slim woman. Her hair is straight hair, big black eyes, pointed nose
and fair complexion. She is 21 years old. She is cheerful and good-humored, so
her classmates are happy to work with her.In addition, she is responsible,
imaginative and honest.
Nat is a good friend of mine. She is
a tall woman. She has long straight hair, big black eyes and pointed nose. She is a
young woman of 21 years.She is creative, responsible and good- looking.
Toon
is a good friend of mine. She is a very tall woman who has a thin figure. She
has long straight hair, big black eyes and pointed nose. She is a young woman
of 21 years. She is friendly,outgoing,and talkative. She is a broad-minded person who always
accepts differences in opinions.
Your classmate look like beautiful and sincere
ReplyDeleteI give you 9 poins
It's a good paragraph, but the title is not interest. And the detail is very short. You should add more detail. I give you 7 point.
ReplyDeleteit's OK, you tell about classmate is a good . I give you 8 point.
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ReplyDeleteIt's a good paragraph it easier to understand and clear; I give you 8 point.